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Max Karson and The White Coats




Max Karson had just finished a rigorous mission. He was walking around town at night looking for some more work when all of a sudden he got jumped by guys in white suits. He had no problem beating them up, however, a sniper got him in the neck with a dart that had a knockout potion in it. During the fight the machine that hovers around him that he uses to communicate with his supervisor, Gordon, while doing field work was destroyed. As he continued to fight he began to feel less and less conscious until he lost all consciousness. The last thing he heard was "Do not worry 'Mark', your suffering will be over with soon enough."

When Max woke up he was in what looked like a doctor's office but it was drearier and there were doctor-looking guys in white coats in the room, approximately six of them. He tried to move but his arms and legs were strapped to a metal board. He also saw that he was wearing nothing but some kind of strange-feeling black underwear. One of them was wiping the tip of a hypodermic needle as he was walking up to him. Before he injected Max with what was in there he told him "Don't worry, this won't hurt too much." It hurt when he had that thing in and out of him, and what happened next hurt even more. His body was changing, bones relocating, anatomy reconfiguring itself. They let him out and he fell onto the floor. His chest started feeling really weird so he clenched it. His legs were now that of a lady's and the rest was falling with it. His crotched diminshed to nothing and the underwear strangley followed. Then the curves finally took root (now his voice was not quite a man's but not quite a woman's) and his butt and hips reconfigured. While they did his chest was swelling up. He grew very nice-sized boobs and his arms and hands turned into that of a lady's. Finally his face reconfigured (now his voice was that of a woman's) and his hair grew long and feminine with curls that looked like Cs that had been pushed leftward to look like Us. He was now a woman. She had one hand clenching her boobs and the other keeping her up. However, something else happened her, her underwear turned into frilly white panties.

"Success!" one of the White Coats shouted. They dragged her into a cell in another room. One of them threw a jacket to her and said "You can put this on." She did and embraced herself. It was really cold in there so she was shivering. Eventually she started to cry.

Meanwhile...

At the SNRA Gordon was tracking the signal coming from Max's device. When he found it he looked around and saw a strange man in a trenchcoat and walked up to him. "Yo Chutooroo," he called. The man turned around and said "Hey Gordon." "Have you seen any weird things lately?" "Well, I did see a bunch of men in white coats who look sort of like doctors carry a huge bag toward Warehouse G-37. They told people it was a feral animal with some contagious disease," Chutooroo answered. Then he pointed the way to it. "Thanks Chutooroo." Gordon started walking to the warehouse. "And hey, would you care for some merhcandise?" Chutooroo asked. "Nah, maybe another time," Gordon answered. "Suit yourself," Chutooroo said.

Gordon walked in the warehouse and looked around. He saw an elevator that looked surprisingly functional for an old warehouse. He pushed a down button and went in. He enterned into an empty room when the elevator was all the way down. He put up his watch-it was kind of bulky-and pressed a button on it. It opened up and he scrolled through its various features by making the motion with his hand. He touched something that looked like a robot and it popped out. It was a small scouter robot. He crouched down and told it "Okay, you find anyway you can to sneak into the room where there controlling surveillance cameras on a human life form. Then when you get there knock out the people that are watching them. Then return to this spot knocking out any other surveillance camera watchmen and wait for me." The robot nodded and used a laser make a hole in the wall and started its mission. When it was done Gordon sneaked all way to the cell the human life-form was in. Luckily, with the information the Scouterbot was sending him head got a detailed map of the facility.

When he got to the point where on the map the room right next to him was the cell he used a gun he brought along to blast a circular piece out of the wall. He kicked the piece and dust was floating around the new entrance. Gordon walked in. Max was still crying until that happened. She turned around to see who it was. The dust cleared quickly and revealed Gordon. When he saw her he said "Maaaaaxy?" She was happy to seem but also knew what he was thinking of doing so she told him firmly "Don't even think about it." "Yeah, let's skip the 'thank yous' and just get the hell out of her before I just can't control myself," Gordon said. He gave Max a gun and they headed for the exit. When they got about three rooms towards the exit they found something that looked like a dog lying dead on the floor with no signs of external damage. Gordon turned it over and there were no signs of external damage on it's underside either, but he did see that it was a bitch. "Huh? The poor bitch must of inhaled a deadly gas," Gordon spoke. Max looked closely at the bitch and saw the same needle mark that she had. "This was a test subject." "You think that the concoction caused dementia?" Gordon asked. "Possibly, or perhaps he couldn't bear to live life as a bitch," Max answered. "Jeez, yeah." While they continued onward-avoiding any personnel- Max asked "Does that map say if there's a locker room or something?" "Let me see." Gordon checked the map in his watched and there was both a men's locker room and a women's locker room. He led Max to the women's locker room.

She looked for a uniform in there and found one. The shirt was a button up one. She grabbed it, looked for a changing area and found, and told Gordon not to look at her and to wait out of the changing area. He did so. The changing area had cubicles that are like those you'd find in a clothing store. When she put on the pants and shirt however, when she was putting on the shirt she pushed her boobs towards her chest because the shirt was not made for women as busty as her. When she got it on it made her feel even more uncomfortable than she already was and the buttons that were at her bust almost popped off. Then she put the coat on and pushed her boobs to her chest again but that made her feel even more uncomfortable then before. When she took off the coat the buttons at her chest popped off. I guess you could say they just wanted to be seen. She groaned, put her jacket back on and went out. Gordon was a little disappointed thinking to himself "Aw, she had to put on a shirt and pants. Oh well, at least it only detracts from her sexiness a little." "All right, now let's get out of this hellhole," Max said.

They started to go to exit again (avoiding any personnel). They got to a room that had weaponry in it. "Whoa, check out all this cool weaponry," Gordon said. Max was looking at but then she saw what looked schematics. She went to it and Gordon followed. She opened them and they revealed the White Coats' plan. Max and Gordon were amazed at what they saw. "Step 1: When the gender-changing formula is perfected and ready to use on humans take a whole bunch of guys and use it on them. Step 2: Use the mind-warp machine to make them our puppets after it has been perfected. Step 3: Use them to conquer the world by getting them employed in the ruling person's home and telling us to weak points. Step 4: If any of us want (at least those of us who aren't married, our crazed feminist wives who work here), use them for sex." Max and Gordon were apolled by their plan and decided to get out of there first and think up a plan later.

When they passed the Scouterbot it went back into Gordon's watch. They went to the nearest entrance to the SNRA, which wasn't very far luckily. Max waited in the "Quarters" area while Gordon calledone of the female operatives over there. She was a tall, thin woman with long, blonde hair and red eyes. "What is it you wanted Gordon?" she asked. "Well, you see Lani. Uh... Look, you're not gonna believe it if I tell you so I'll just show you," he answered. He called Max over and Lani couldn't believe it. "Max, is that really you?" she asked. "Yeah, it's me." "How did this happen?" Max told Lani what happened. Lani offered to teach Max all she needed to know about being a woman so she wouldn't be conspicuous and she accepted. They had Gordon wait in Max's quarter. After they were done Lani asked Max "So are you going to stay with the name Max or are you going to answer by a different name?" Max answered with "I think I'll go under 'Maxine'." "Ok, but you'll need some new clothes so why don't you try on some of mine." "Ok." Maxine went into Lani's quarters and put on one outfit. Amazingly, they were the same size everything: shirt size, pants size, shoe size, even panty and bust size. Maxine went over to Gordon and he asked her what she was going to do now. She answered "I'm going to recruit some firepower. They must of tightened the security around there. I'm going to enlist the aid of my father." "Wow, old Klaes back in action." "Do you want to come along?" "Nah, that much more time alone with you I probably won't be able to help myself. Besides, I've got to wait for a new Watchman to get made." "Alright, suit yourself."

Lani let Maxine borrow more clothes for the journey. She was on the first flight to Jamestown, North Dakota. She wondered what would happen when her father saw her like this.
Part 1 of 2

What will Klaes think of Maxine indeed. The organization that kidnapped Max and turned him into a woman are seriously not known as the White Coats. That's just what I'm referring to them as.
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12345td Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice work, i like it
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kesebaran Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2009   Traditional Artist
sounds almost like Ranma 1/2
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TheRealYuma Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
How the hell does it?
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kesebaran Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2009   Traditional Artist
guy turning into a girl?

im just saayyyyyyyiiiiinnnnnn'
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TheRealYuma Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah but... wow, just because of that. tch tch tch.
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kesebaran Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2009   Traditional Artist
just don't involve any cold water...
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TheRealYuma Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Or red hair, or cursed springs, or a midget who steals panties (have you seen the Game Informer joke on him?) or Japan, or... I would say the possibilty of Max being permanently stuck as a girl and ending up with Gordon but fans and their fiction. Why I'll bet that one day someone's gonna do that with your characters. At least though it couldn't happen and be canon with Max's adventures.
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kesebaran Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2009   Traditional Artist
someone's gonna do what with my characters?
i got lost again
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TheRealYuma Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Someone will most likely make fic where one of the gets turned into a girl, stuck like that, and end up with a dude.
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