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Chapter 2 Maxine, You've Let Yourself Go


Gordon, the boss, and his wife were talking about Maxine's condition.

"Well gentleman, I think I've come up with a term for Maxine's condition: Androgichosis."

"What?"

"It means that because of the stress from fulfilling both gender roles one of his forms just broke apart due to the stress. How many missions has he been on where he's either had to turn into a woman or has become one?"

"Gee, an innumerable amount I'd say."

"Well, if my memory serves me right, the last time at looked at their records it was... 567."

They all realized it now.

"But his father didn't go senile so why did he-"

"His father found Edona. Max didn't have anyone did he?"

"No."

"I don't think Maxine's condition can be cured so the only thing she can do now is just accept being a woman." Upon hearing this the boss and Gordon burst into laughter.

"There's one thing that won't happen."

"Good point, which is why I want you to check up on her sometime. Can you do that Gordon?"

He answered with. "Yes ma'am."

Two weeks after Maxine had stayed in female form Gordon checked up on her. It was during the night and last-minute. He said as he opened the door and entered "Maxine, it's me Gordon. Whoa." Once again the place didn't look so good. It looked a little better than when Maxine was a senile man but the feeling of anguish was still there.

He heard Maxine's voice say "Gordon, hold on I'll be right there." When he saw Maxine she was wearing nothing more than panties and socks, and she had a beer in her hand. She was clearly drunk. "You're drunk," Gordon told her with concern. She just told him "Nah, Ahm jus' a leetle under da weader. So how have you been?"

"Better than you." He grabbed her hand. "Come on, get some clothes on. We're going back to the SNRA."

She just pulled him back and said "Do we have to be in such a hurry. Besides, I know why you're really here. You love me, don'cha? You want me, don'cha? You love what you see, don'cha?" She put his hands on her breasts. "You like these big, perky breatszes of mine don'cha?" Gordon groped a little so the answer to that is yes.

Maxine made her body touch Gordon's. She whispered to him "You wanna screw me don't you? Well go ahead. I'll forgive you in da mornin'."

He told her "I don't wanna screw you."

She just told him "Then why's your dick so hard?" Then she wrapped her arms around him and started kissing him. He wanted to push her off but he couldn't. Soon she started using her tongue and that's what made him fall. He couldn't decide whether this was a dream come true, a nightmare, or both. He could only hear the Tom Jones song Sexbomb playing in his head.

Finally, he made a decision. He managed to push her off and get out of there. She said "Aw, come back. Oh, guess I'll jus' lay her an' pass out."

The next morning Maxine had a horrible hangover. She got up, held her head, put on a nearby jacket and got a beer out of her fridge. She put on a pair of sunglasses when she heard a car pull up. There was a knock at her door. She also heard someone say "Maxine, you need to come with me." She knew that it was the boss's wife and opened the door for her.

"Why don't you put some clothes on before coming with us." Maxine complied.

Once again she found herself being interviewed by the boss's wife. She opened her beer and was about to drink it but the boss's wife snatched it from her. She told her "The first step on the road to recovery is to give up a major grief factor."

"But if I can't drown my sorrow into that then what can I drown it into," Maxine complained.

The boss's wife went into the bathroom in the room, dumped the beer out, exited the bathroom, pulled out root beer whose brand had a man who looked like he was from the 1800s on it, got the top off, handed it to Maxine and told her "Drown them in this. It's better you pass out from sugar shock than you grow a beer belly." She took it and started drinking.

After the interview was done. Maxine waited in the room for a few minutes. The boss's wife came back in and told her "Max, I think it's best if you stay with some of your girlfriends. I suggest those members of the Kitsune Klub."

"I'll get packing." She started to leave the room.

"By the way." Maxine stopped. "There'll be someone else who will help you through this hard time." Maxine left the room.

On her way out of the SNRA she met Lani. She embraced her. "Maxy, I heard about what happened." She got teary-eyed and continued. "You really can't go back can you?"

Maxine answered with one work; "Yes." Lani let her go and told her "Don't worry though I'll help you." Maxine thanked Lani.

They did what they needed to do and got on a plane to Japan.
Gordon, lucky bastard or lucky he did the right thing? Now I know what you may be thinking but there's no guarantee. I don't care much for GordonxMaxine.
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SebastiansSire Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor Maxine she is messed up in the head.
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TheRealYuma Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
In this alternate tale.
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SebastiansSire Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
True. You should continue this series since it sounds cool and it is a good series.
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TheRealYuma Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah.
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SebastiansSire Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Just imagine the renewed purpose of the Max Carson Artists!!!! C'mon there were cool characters and awesome random events.
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TheRealYuma Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah.
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Princess-Kay Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2010
About the same quality as last time, though I wish you'd remember to split the dialogue up...
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TheRealYuma Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Specifically where? I don't really know the rules of writing (at least not consciously). In fact, when one of my past teachers told us that we can ignore the rules and to write in our own style I may have taken that a little bit too literally.
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Princess-Kay Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
Don't have a specific wear - as a rule, however, two people can't talk in the same paragraph.

Sometimes, you do ignore the rules of grammar - but it's best to know them first, because there are some rules were the ignoring makes it flow better... and some where it won't.
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TheRealYuma Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Well, that helps a little.
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Princess-Kay Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
:)
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TheRealYuma Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
ty
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